is this too ***, should i just quit this?

[jboyce]

Normally i rap, but i tried some singin type ish, this is a sample, should i quit with the singin and slit my wrists for even tryin dis or wha? parts are sketch i know its jus a draft, whatcha think then...you can bash me its cool, i neva sang before so whatever.

edit: updated lil bit to jus singin on hook
http://s92198702.onlinehome.us/roughrogh.mp3

[d112crzy]

You should def slit your wrists.

Stick to rapping.

But it doesnt really sound like you were trying.

[SleepersOwn]

STOP NOW !!!!

naa but seriously..Singing is not your strong point.

[jboyce]

thas all i needed to hear, thx =)

[apuforyou]

Its not all that bad man, could be alot worse lol

what programs do you use for making beats?

[93EXaesthetic]

[head4life]

OMG LOL

thats bad

when you kill yourself can I have your cb7?

rofl just sitck to rapping

[ceelooboob]

[deevergote]

I say take a small part of the singing and work it into a rap as a hook... two lines or so would be good. The beat is great.


I noticed that you changed the way you type. You type like a rapper now... dat ish be mad irritatin yo. Stay true to yourself. You don't need to become "a rapper" to be a rapper.

[Charliehstle209]

I say take a small part of the singing and work it into a rap as a hook... two lines or so would be good. The beat is great.


I noticed that you changed the way you type. You type like a rapper now... dat ish be mad irritatin yo. Stay true to yourself. You don't need to become "a rapper" to be a rapper.

Im with this guy...

how old are you?

Just do what makes you happy and something that you can stand doing for a long time. I have a few friends that are into 'rapping'. They stick to their shiet and make beats all day long...

Here check'em out.

http://www.myspace.com/chivalrousdrizzt
http://www.myspace.com/destructobunnymusic

this guys from canada.
http://www.myspace.com/inkspillchunes

[jboyce]

i'm 21, and ya i changed my writing style for this track, i'm jus tryin it out to see if i like the end result. kinda weird so far cause i'm doin it in sets instead of jus writin off my dome. it makes it easier to hit the beat tho for sure.

i checked out those cats myspace pg, they got some sic ish, thats the kinda style i like to stay wit, i'm jus experimentin wit this

[MR.PHIL]

Sounds real Good to me ,keep doing what you do ,you'll get better
just have lil bit more confidence in yourself.

[head4life]

Sounds real Good to me ,keep doing what you do ,you'll get better
just have lil bit more confidence in yourself.

you need to get your ears checked

[MR.PHIL]

you need to get your ears checked

are you serious? it's my opinion Bro ,don't start nothing .

[Turbo Dave]

i'm 21, and ya i changed my writing style for this track, i'm jus tryin it out to see if i like the end result. kinda weird so far cause i'm doin it in sets instead of jus writin off my dome. it makes it easier to hit the beat tho for sure.

i checked out those cats myspace pg, they got some sic ish, thats the kinda style i like to stay wit, i'm jus experimentin wit this

have you been watching 8mile again?