Need some opinions/constructive critisism on some music

[blazenem]

check this out tell me what you think!!!



http://www.imeem.com/people/l5Kp3Xl/music/


give your honest opinion. this is my music so i like constructive critisism!!

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[deevergote]

I missed this when you first posted. Checking out We Ridin now. I dig the beat, and you flow well over it. Some of the doubling sounds a bit amateurish, but I've heard worse. You could definitely improve that song with a real bass, rather than the synth bass.

I'm heading out, so I'll listen to more later. So far though, I like what I hear.

[blazenem]

good lookin out deev you still with your band?

[slammed4thgen]

his band broke up...

i think your shit is pretty good and im not a rap fan.

[blazenem]

his band broke up...

i think your shit is pretty good and im not a rap fan.

thanks man

[deevergote]

Yeah, my band split. We're discussing getting back together, but so far nothing is definite.

[93sleeper]

I really think your good...I know this is a really hard to do so I want to give you props on just the concept of rapping over a beat....I listened your music and then I listened to one of favorite rappers right now (J.COle). Really thought why his lyrics seem to stick out more then yours.

1. He always talks about where is from and how he came up. (Made it easy for the listener to relate to him)
2. He has some sick sick metaphors (everytime you listen, you hear something new and catchy)
3. He tell a story about what's going on in his life(one thing I love)
4. Of course his beats are a better but he has money to spend on big producers

Other then that I think your have a lot of potential. I hope this helps in your dream to become a famous rapper.

[deevergote]

What are your plans with your music? Are you hoping to make it in the industry, or are you just doing it as a hobby?

[blazenem]

my plans are just to have fun maybe get my foot in the door to do some behind the scene stuff work with younger artists developing them. i just like to make songs. if something was to happen and someone threw money at me to actually do a album i wouldnt turn em down lol

[blazenem]

I really think your good...I know this is a really hard to do so I want to give you props on just the concept of rapping over a beat....I listened your music and then I listened to one of favorite rappers right now (J.COle). Really thought why his lyrics seem to stick out more then yours.

1. He always talks about where is from and how he came up. (Made it easy for the listener to relate to him)
2. He has some sick sick metaphors (everytime you listen, you hear something new and catchy)
3. He tell a story about what's going on in his life(one thing I love)
4. Of course his beats are a better but he has money to spend on big producers

Other then that I think your have a lot of potential. I hope this helps in your dream to become a famous rapper.

thanx for the detailed response

[deevergote]

my plans are just to have fun maybe get my foot in the door to do some behind the scene stuff work with younger artists developing them. i just like to make songs. if something was to happen and someone threw money at me to actually do a album i wouldnt turn em down lol

Ok, so you're right where I am with my music

I figured it's good to see what you're aiming for, since I could offer criticism that would be geared toward someone that wanted to make it in the business... which you DO have a potentially mainstream sound if you wanted to cultivate it.

Have you talked music with AbsurdNY yet? His stuff is really good as well.

[blazenem]

no not one on one but i did listen to some of his tracks and i like what i heard. i did hit up his thread with a link here to see what he thinks

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