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    rappin over K.O.S instrumental

    ah first time i have written and rapped over a beat online

    rhymin like a bachelor / my soul wants to relax in the pasteurs / but it flow in north shore waves / my mind is brilliant like rays / but dull like moonglow / luminous lyrical lounge laid back type / in the heat of the night / my pen aches to write / so i write / K.O.S. wrong n right / maybe god is pissed bad karma from the years / my moms k nows im crazy resistance is futile / so she prays religous / but life is vicous yet we have to act civilized / the daily structure n rules i like to break them / lifes a bitch that im datin / the sun rises in the east / another 24 hours rise like yeast / under stars we sleep / born in the slums of the far east / on land created by tectonic movement/ rhymin 27 years later on some smooth shit / you can groove wit/ so much on my mind i cant recline / if i had a lazy boy i couldnt recline im aimin for the top so i climb tryin to find the rhyme that defines / my current status / electronic recording apparatus / MJ asked whos Bad / Im the baddest / winning lyrical beauty paegents amongst the crowds of fascist / DJ Danger Mouse couldnt mash this n the marlboro man couldnt match this/ i burn slow like a beedy / 100 fps like a BB im sometimes cooler than the beejeez / AWD like a mistubishi / back in it observin like snorkelin / delicate on this track like procelain / determination n what KNOWLEDGE OF SELF / get your militant status off the shelf / im not policitcal just critical / sellin your soul so pitiful / so i breath n stop / and i question like im socrates im striken out swingin more than 3/ just a rhyme innovator trying to find the minds of spectators / n keep my distance from haters, knowlege of economics n paper chasers / watchin my citys skyline skyscrapers/ finding my place under the atmoshpere / maybe its global so im gonna meltdown like chernobyl

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    doooooooood. im feeling that. that beat is soooo queenbridge feel to it man. gotz that NY flow it
    Last edited by sackingz123; 09-18-2008, 05:18 AM.

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      #3
      Originally posted by sackingz123 View Post
      doooooooood. im feeling that. that beat is soooo queenbridge feel to it man. gotz that NY flow it
      thx i dont know what "queenbridge feel " just a dope beat imo... its an intsrumental off the blackstar album by mos def n talib kweli who happen to be from NYC.. a classic!! the song is called knowledge of self K.0.S. the whole blackstar album was hot..

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        #4
        Pretty good.

        Im feeling most of it. A couple of words that youcould cut, but only to make it flow a little better.



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        Originally posted by Jarrett
        Is there a goal you're trying to accomplish besides looking dope as hell?

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          #5
          Originally posted by greencb7inkc View Post
          Pretty good.

          Im feeling most of it. A couple of words that youcould cut, but only to make it flow a little better.

          i agree... i usually freestyle... so when i write it becomes a challenge matching up with the beat....kinda like tetris....n i kinda like blocked the one entrance you can put the long piece to knock out 5 lines.... or some crazy shit like that... i know its off a lil... i need to work on my writing ..i think my flow is tight tho

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            #6
            Yeah, definitely. Sounds better than anything i could do.


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            Originally posted by Jarrett
            Is there a goal you're trying to accomplish besides looking dope as hell?

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              #7
              Really good man...Although when I think of M.J I think of Jordan not Jackson

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